Completed added effects on final music.

Here I have used, 'Tube chop' to show certain changes I have made to my music video in order for my final music video to appear more successful, professional and conventional for the audience watching.





  Here I have changed a long shot of water moving by adding the special effect of super expose as well as adding both artists appearing positive cutting to the beat of the music video. I changed this part of the video in order for the music video to appear more appealing and positive as a whole. 





  I then edited this part of the music video by changing the artist's lip synching by making the artist clear lip-synch to the music playing, I changed this part of the video in order for the audience to understand whom the artists are in the music video as well as making the music video appear both more appealing and conventional.



  Also I changed this part of the music video by changing a long shot by using the special effect of super expose. I changed this part of the music video in order for the video appear more appealing and link to the storyline of the music video itself. Therefore by adding this special effect made the music video become more successful as it become more appealing and made the storyline become easier to understand.




 As well as I added the special effect of super expose to a long shot of nature, I decided to add to the effect super expose in order to make the music video become more appealing and professional; this is because by adding an special effect the music video will then appear more professional as not many artists include use of special effects within their music video. Therefore by using the special effect of super expose the music video then appears more original and interesting for the audience watching.  

Animatic three.

This advert is about a person who draws a person to life but then decides that the drawn person is not what the artist wished the person would appear to look, which then leads to the artist deleting the person but erasing the hand drawn person. The hand drawn person then wishes to take action by taking control, (of the artist's pencil) by re-drawing themselves once again, as well as drawing a positive facial expressions, this is to communicate to the hand drawn person feels more of a positive after taking control of the matter. Therefore this advert is communicating a hidden meaning, which is if a person believes you appear unattractive, (such as your chose of clothing is unattractive) then simply put a stop to this by taking control, such as telling others. This will then resolve the issue in a responsible and sensible manner.



Here is the music, that I have decided to use for my social messaging campaign advertisement:      

Animatic two.

This advert is about a young female aged 15 years of age called, Poppy. This character induces themselves to the audience, in order for the audience to understand more about this character's background and lifestyle. However this character begins to explain how their dress scene doesn't appeal to other people's taste of clothing, which then leads this character being bullied because their chose of clothing appear, 'unattactive' in other people's eyes. This then leads to the character feeling alone, depressed and upset because of other people's options towards the main character's,(Poppy) chose of style. However the main character then decides to resolve this situation by telling others in order to help stop the bullying. Therefore this advert is communicating a situation which can be resolved in a responsible and sensible manner.

Animatic one.

Here I have created an a plan of how my advert will appear when completed. This advert will be about a young female aged 17, whom will be played by myself, (Clare O'Mara). This character logins onto a popular social networking site and finds a range of offence messages sent from a cyber bully. The story then communicates to the audience how this situation should be handled, this is the audience become aware of what is needed to be done in a responsible and calm way.







Here is the music, that I have decided to you for my advert:

Storyboards of ideas for adverts.

Storyboard 1:

Storyboard 2:

Storyboard 3:

Mindmap of ideas for advert.

Feedback from client.

I received feedback from my client, feedback is important part of creating a music video as it helps the artists understand what is required in order to create a successful, appealing and professional music video overall. The type of feedback I received was a list of improvements such as from my first draft my client noticed that I could improve the music video by changing a long shot to match to the beat of the music, (such as add more footage at a short length in order to match the beat of the music), changing some of the lip-synching by making sure the artist is clearly lip-synching to the music video correctly and by changing the ending from a location shot by adding some form of special effects.


I acknowledged the feedback given to me from my client by making the changes suggested by my client. This is because in my final music video I made the following changes, I changed a long shot, which was high in length that needs to match to the beat of the music. I improved this part of my music video by changing the footage by including new footage as well as the special effect of super expose, (super expose is a special effect which shows two lots of footage at the same time, this is created by changing one of two of the footage's capacity). I then created some footage of water moving at a fast speed while myself and Khrystlyn Wilson was shown in parts of the music video at the same time of the water moving, while matching to the beat of the music.


For my second part of my feedback I needed to alter a part of music video of the artist's lip-synching, this was required in order for the audience to understand whom the artists are in the music video and so the music video appears more conventional as well as successful. Therefore in order for my music video to become more professional and conventional, I decided to make the following alterations, which was I edited the part of the lip-synching by using the editing software, this is completed by deleting any of non needed footage by using the, 'cut tool' which is provided on the editing software of, 'Adobe Premiere pro CS6'. Once I completed this improvement, I've had then made by music video become more successful by changing the artists- lip-sycnhing by making it more successful and correct.

Also I received feedback stating I should slightly change my ending of a plain location by adding some form a special effect, this improvement was required as it will significantly improve the video by making the music video become more appealing. Therefore I improved this part of the music video by adding the special effect of super expose, I added both footage of myself and Khrystlyn Wilson walking around exploring the location as well as included footage of a location shot. Once I complted this improvment, I have now made my music video become more successful and appealing by inluding use of special effects.